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Date Posted: Thu, Apr 22 2004, 21:59:33
Author: T.E.O.W.
Subject: "songfic hoobastank "the reason" first fic i kno it sucx r&r"

That was the summary for a Harry Potter songfic. There's probably one paragraph's worth of material there beyond the pop-song lyrics, but what there is is baaaad.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1830912

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*a/n* just to give u a past check, Hermione and Draco were dating, but Hermione breaks up with Draco after he says cruel things to Hermione when he’s mad. She thinks hes back to mean old Draco.
~*~*~
“Hermione! Just listen to me!”
“No Draco!! Its over! You’re just like everybody says! Its over! Don’t you get it? What do u want with a stupid mudblood like me anyways!” Hermione hollered at him through tears.

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A silver chain layed in her musix box and she picked it up.

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“‘Mione I know your mad. And you have every right to be. But you’re my reason I changed. From mean old Draco, to me now. I want to always be there for you. Always and forever. That’s why I need you to hear this..”
Hermione’s heart pounded as Draco got off the bed and got down on one knee. “Hermione will you marry me?” Hermione passed out on the bed.

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[sighs] It's actually pretty hard to get that much Canon violation and OOC into so few words. Troll?

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