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Date Posted: Mon, Apr 12 2004, 22:23:56
Author: Heart-Stricken
Subject: SeungGirl's back...*deep sigh*

<A rel=nofollow target=_blank HREF="http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1814430">They just don't learn, do they?</A>

So. The Pain of a Forgotten Soul opens on an endearing note, with the author telling us to fuck off:

<I>IMPORTANT NOTE!!!!!!!!!!: Something happened to my account! Whenever I try to log in, it keeps telling me, “This account is no longer active” so here I am with a new account. I don’t know if this is a ‘forever’ thing or if this could just be a problem with fanfiction.net, but just in case, I’m posting my stories on this spare account.



If somebody tried guessing my password so they could deactivate my account as a joke (or maybe they were pissed at me) then whoever that person is better FUCK OFF RIGHT NOW!!</I>

Awww. Ain't she a sweet'art?

I'm trying to write some kinda dissection of the fic itself, but I'm just going into fits of giggles. This is hysterical -- possibly even better than deadsoul's LiveJournal.

<I>I really didn’t want to be raped! Especially not by an old man at the age of what...? Around his 40’s?!

“Don’t rape me, please!” I pleaded. “If you do, my parents will kill me!” I stared at the old man but he just wore a nasty grin on his face.</I>

Gads. It's so inane I can't not be amused by this.

<I>“I have a headache. I can’t go on like this. What have I done to deserve such a life?”</I>

...

<B>BWAHAHA!</B>

<I>“DON’T DO IT!!!” I screamed my lungs out and kicked his chest and guts. How could Freddy be this perverted?!!??!?!!!!! Why not do it to a slutty girl instead of an innocent virgin?!

As I kicked and kicked, his grabbed me legs slicing them with his razor-sharp claws and hissed, “Shut the fuck up, bitch!!”

Now it was clear to me that no matter what I did, he was gonna rape me. He was gonna keep being stubborn with me... and I was really starting to piss him off. My legs began to bleed after he pierced them. I clenched my fists trying to hold in the pain. I couldn’t help thinking that the pain will grow once Freddy began to make love with me. The thought of that just grossed me out! I mean, how would you feel making love to a big, fat, sweaty toilet plumber? Ah, now you see? Now you know how I feel.</I>

Like, totally!

<I>After a while, Freddy’s relaxing, soothing caressing made me sleepy again. “I have a feeling I’m gonna...” I yawned before continuing. He smiled at me and leaned closer. “Sleep well my dear, and I shall finish this my way.” He told me as he kissed me.</I>

*softens* Poor Freddy. He deserves better than to be turned into Mary Sue's alternating fluffbunny/rapist...

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