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Date Posted: Sun, Nov 16 2003, 0:22:04
Author: Lurkerbelle
Subject: Godawful real-person/Mary-Sue rapefic!

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Features spelling as bad as any effort by a Suvian too young to understand that Legolas isn't real, while incorporating real people, rape, insane improbability, and language that can kill overly sensitive English teachers. And confusion between "woman" and "women", I don't think I've seen that one before but it adds a whole new dimension.

"She kept looking around her while Lara was sniffing a lantarn. She frooze when she heard steppes behind her."

"Orlando heard the dogs and ran faster as if he was chased my demons. Soon he saw them and saw a men. he didn't saw the women lying there and said i am sorry sir for the dogs. "

"Orlando smiled and said "Because you are nice sweet looking women. You look very beautifull. And i just wanted to help in anyway i can." The bath was filled and then turned to her again and said "May i ?" "

Hoo boy. People don't post troll-fics at adultfanfiction.net, do they?

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