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Date Posted: Sat, Nov 08 2003, 1:12:53
Author: T.E.O.W.
Subject: It gets worse!
In reply to: Black Pearl 's message, "I think I shall take this straight to the PPC...." on Fri, Nov 07 2003, 14:26:14

Well, maybe not worse, as nothing much could possibly be worse than that... poem... thing... But the rest is as Godawful as can be.

Behold a randomly selected sample paragraph!

* * *

"Ok, what do you want to know?" he said giving in. "where I am for starts?" "You are in middle earth, on the great east road just south of Bree," he answered. "Which is about two to three days ride to Rivendell" he explained "okay, so how did I get here?" she asked. "I brought you here to fulfill a prophecy." He answered, "prophesy?" she said curious and lost. "I'll explain that as we walk, I want to make camp before night falls" he said. "You, brought me here?" she said, "Yes I just said that" he responded. "How?' "I am a wizard" she almost started laughing again, oh yeah right a wizard what's next elves?

* * *

Wow, she actually makes those Suvians who just leave the punctuation out look good!

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Replies:

  • WTF is up with the eyes thing? (RANT ALERT!) -- Wandering Namek, Sat, Nov 08 2003, 6:02:56

  • I'm waiting for the day when a Sue describes her eyes as shit brown. So I guess I'm going to be around for a long time. -- Snorkle, Sat, Nov 08 2003, 11:52:11

  • I know what you mean. One time I read a Sue fic where the Sue wore a bunch of necklaces. The author described every freaking one, along with her other jewelry! It probably took up four or so pages! Don't ask me to find it for you, I don't remember the link. Sorry. u.u;; (NT) -- |, Sat, Nov 08 2003, 15:23:59



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