Date Posted:23:48:47 07/30/10 Fri Author:Page Subject: Welcome to the Lit Forum, Cheryl! >>>> In reply to:
Cheryl H.
's message, "Re: Found! >>>>" on 01:51:39 07/28/10 Wed
We're so glad to have you here! Feel free to jump right in, and don't be nervous.
Thank you SO much for reading my excerpt! It's a first draft, and very rough, so I really appreciate your suggestions for when I start cleaning it up and polishing it.
You're spot on about Sherry's gaffe being in an earlier scene. The minute she hung up the phone she knew she'd said everything in exactly the wrong way and that he took it wrong, too. That's where she does the majority of beating herself up over it although she hasn't stopped much in the intervening months.
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