A baby!!! Rayne's going to have Garoben's baby! OMG, I so freakin' love that!
That moment when she finally lets herself know what's been going on with her body is so wonderful! Thank heavens she dragged that chair over to the mirror with her.
And I really like how everyone already knew she was pregnant and never said anything. When DD announced her first pregnancy, her grandmother and aunt both said, "I knew you were."
After all Rayne's been through, it's so great to have her realize her enemy is truly dead and gone, she has a wonderful place she can stay and raise her child, the best friends to help her, and that there's a piece of Garoben left in the world.
>A baby!!! Rayne's going to have Garoben's baby! OMG,
>I so freakin' love that!
It was happening one way or another, but now that Garoben's dead, it that much sweeter that Rayne has a bit of him still. Funny, when I wrote the end the first time and Garoben had lived, the child born was a son. When I decided to continue to torture Rayne with misery, the baby became a girl. Dunno why...
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>That moment when she finally lets herself know what's
>been going on with her body is so wonderful! Thank
>heavens she dragged that chair over to the mirror with
>her.
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>And I really like how everyone already knew she was
>pregnant and never said anything. When DD announced
>her first pregnancy, her grandmother and aunt both
>said, "I knew you were."
I think Keresh's swearing at her was my favorite. ANd that 'selfish' was the only part of it she found offensive to her...
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>After all Rayne's been through, it's so great to have
>her realize her enemy is truly dead and gone, she has
>a wonderful place she can stay and raise her child,
>the best friends to help her, and that there's a piece
>of Garoben left in the world.
I think the reworking of the end is going to happen soon and I'll post as I go. Duke Arduval helps her so much, almost taking a fatherly role, despite their past differences.
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>I love it!!
Thanks! I want to finish this story so badly, btu there's so much to tell... it may never happen.
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