Date Posted:12:07:11 07/31/10 Sat Author:debikm Subject: Thank you! In reply to:
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's message, "Oh! Oh! OH! >>>" on 23:55:10 07/30/10 Fri
>A baby!!! Rayne's going to have Garoben's baby! OMG,
>I so freakin' love that!
It was happening one way or another, but now that Garoben's dead, it that much sweeter that Rayne has a bit of him still. Funny, when I wrote the end the first time and Garoben had lived, the child born was a son. When I decided to continue to torture Rayne with misery, the baby became a girl. Dunno why...
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>That moment when she finally lets herself know what's
>been going on with her body is so wonderful! Thank
>heavens she dragged that chair over to the mirror with
>her.
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>And I really like how everyone already knew she was
>pregnant and never said anything. When DD announced
>her first pregnancy, her grandmother and aunt both
>said, "I knew you were."
I think Keresh's swearing at her was my favorite. ANd that 'selfish' was the only part of it she found offensive to her...
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>After all Rayne's been through, it's so great to have
>her realize her enemy is truly dead and gone, she has
>a wonderful place she can stay and raise her child,
>the best friends to help her, and that there's a piece
>of Garoben left in the world.
I think the reworking of the end is going to happen soon and I'll post as I go. Duke Arduval helps her so much, almost taking a fatherly role, despite their past differences.
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>I love it!!
Thanks! I want to finish this story so badly, btu there's so much to tell... it may never happen.
debikm