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Date Posted: 16:42:59 10/28/09 Wed
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dea
Subject: dropping by swiftly
In reply to: Debi 's message, "Come along now... ;-)" on 20:43:14 10/24/09 Sat

i agree with Esther and Page about the check-in scene; it deserves to be written.

what i did not like very much was Valerie stepping on his toes. or Daniel's reply. i cannot avoid thinking it was a tad offensive. because it really hurts, you know? it's not a slight poke on the ribs, for instance. i don't know, i think it's too soon to associate pain with pleasure. they're not that intimate, are they? maybe it's just me, but it sort of makes Valerie look silly. not the "i'm-in-love" silly, just immature. maybe tickling would be nicer. and the idea i have of Daniel is that of a gentleman. i don't think he would say "bitch" to her, let alone in a public situation. instead he could say a generic "bugger" - he's English, is he, if I remember well. they could laugh about it, break the tension. even though they end up trashing the room later. do i make any sense?

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>i agree with Esther and Page about the check-in scene; >it deserves to be written. > >what i did not like very much was Valerie stepping on >his toes. or Daniel's reply. i cannot avoid thinking >it was a tad offensive. because it really hurts, you >know? it's not a slight poke on the ribs, for >instance. i don't know, i think it's too soon to >associate pain with pleasure. they're not that >intimate, are they? maybe it's just me, but it sort of >makes Valerie look silly. not the "i'm-in-love" silly, >just immature. maybe tickling would be nicer. and the >idea i have of Daniel is that of a gentleman. i don't >think he would say "bitch" to her, let alone in a >public situation. instead he could say a generic >"bugger" - he's English, is he, if I remember well. >they could laugh about it, break the tension. even >though they end up trashing the room later. do i make >any sense?
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