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Subject: Re: Yo yo not a hobo


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Derek Baumann
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Date Posted: 11:56:51 04/08/04 Thu
In reply to: Joey mankes 's message, "Yo yo not a hobo" on 15:33:30 04/07/04 Wed

Your key point of this proposal is very good. This proposal is very surprising to me and I would watch this show if it really came out on TV. The descriptions of things are pretty good, i think you can add a little more detail though. I like how it takes place in Bellingham becasue thats wher my sister goes to college. There were a few spelling and grammar errors that you should read through and fix. Other then that this is a very surprising show.

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Re: Yo yo not a hoboTracy Houghton22:53:21 04/08/04 Thu


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