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Date Posted: 06:30:02 04/30/03 Wed
Author: O-Bug
Subject: Not gonna rewrite?
In reply to: O-Bug 's message, "Walter/Nikita and Nikita/Madeline scenes" on 12:10:03 04/29/03 Tue

Shanola, I don't want you to look at all of my comments and feel overwhelmed or depressed to the point of where you don't even want to look at the story again.

I knew by your opening message that this was an early piece of writing and that you've progressed beyond this point, so would you prefer that I don't critique line-by-line and comment on specifics of your choosing?

~O

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[> [> [> [> Jumping in here... -- JayBee, 10:28:20 04/30/03 Wed

I won't presume to speak for Shanola, but I got the impression she wasn't really planning on rewriting to begin with. She offered this up as something we could play with so that everyone could see how a public beta would work on this board.

I don't know about anyone else, but I hope you continue with this critique, because it's quite interesting to read! I'm getting a lot out of your (and the other) posts.

That, to me, is the big plus of public betas -- more people get the opporunity to benefit and learn than just the author and beta. As soon as I have a finished product that would be appropriate for this board, I fully intend to come back here and offer it for public slicing and dicing myself.

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[> [> [> [> Rewriting -- Shanola, 20:17:39 04/30/03 Wed

I did offer this as an example, JayBee is right.

As for rewriting this story, well, I've gone in circles with it for years. Yes, I should rewrite it because I've progressed (I hope!) and it's terrible to have something like this out there. No, I shouldn't rewrite because I've progressed and it's good to have something like this out there.

I'll probably go in circles with it for some time. Heh.

But I'm curious to see what everyone has to say as they beta it. So, O'Bug, please don't stop unless you've decided it isn't worth your time. I think a lot of people are learning a lot from of your beta, though. I know I am.

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