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Date Posted: 15:45:20 06/21/02 Fri
Author: Nestra
Subject: Comments (r)
In reply to: Deedra 's message, "The Copy-Cat Conspiracy. Part 8" on 15:27:47 06/18/02 Tue

"Whoo comma Popsicle! Easy there. You're with friends."

Mick called her "popsicle" once.

Mick tries to ....

Tries to what?

Before Marco can finish Nikita shakes her head

Shakes usually means no. "Nods" means yes.

Mick gently removes the tape from Nikitas mouth as she pulls away.

Nikita's

"Untie me! UNTIE ME NOW!" she repeatedly barks.

Uh, barks? That's kind of a strange description.

"No, I'm not. The man sent on that mission did die but he was my clone."

What mission?

Nikita looks at Mick and says, "I suppose your a clone?"

you're

Growing tired of all the laymen talk, Marco interjects,

How is that "laymen" talk?

We need you to
help us, rather Center, regain control of Section.

Mick and Marco work for Center?

More importantly, we need to rescue George from Section and deliver him safely to Center."

Why?

"I'll need to pickup one thing from my room then will go."

pick up is two words. "then we'll go."

As the trio leave Nikita's apartment for Section,

Why are they taking her luggage to Section?

Nikita asks, " By the way just which one of you was it, who stunned me?"

After Mick shuts the door

Uh, what happened to the question she just asked? And wasn't Mick going with them?

to Nikita's appartment,

apartment

And we hear this song, Dead Souls by Nine Inch Nails. (Readers Note; Great new LFN song. It goes something like this. They keep calling me....)
http://www.aadikah.com/nikita/players/music.html

If you want to include links like this, I strongly recommend against inserting them into the story text. Put them at the end.

Nikita, Mick and Marco made it back to Section and are outside the white room.

Okay, I thought Mick stayed behind and the phone was ringing. What happened to the phone?

Mick uses his status to verbally back the guards off.

His status? What status?

I'm not sure when this story is supposed to take place. If Mick is Mr. Jones, that puts it in the first half of fifth season. But there's been no indication of that, plus, Madeline was dead by that point.

Mick takes George out of Section

They just let him leave with George?

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[> [> [> Re: Comments (r) - Thanks again! -- Deedra, 07:52:33 06/24/02 Mon

Thanks again!

God bless,
Deedra

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