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Date Posted: 20:04:16 04/14/05 Thu
Author: Persephone
Subject: My thoughts
In reply to: Diane 's message, "Okay - Chapter 4" on 11:11:28 04/04/05 Mon

I also have a little trouble believeing that Michael would tell Adam so much. Whose to say that he and Adam haven't talked it out already. We don't have to know what the two of them said to each other. It might be a good way to introduce new readers to the situation, but here most of us already know what happened. If you'd really like to get into Adam's head a little and feel he can't go to a therapist in the story, why not have Michael act as his therapist? He doesn't have to explain what happened, just deal with how Adam felt about everything. Just a thought.

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[> [> [> Interesting idea -- Diane, 20:28:49 04/14/05 Thu

Maybe looking at from a six-year old's POV? Sliding over the whole "Grandpa" thing.I'll have to see what I can come up with.

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