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Date Posted: 22:19:57 04/29/05 Fri
Author: Diane
Subject: Okay - Chapter 15
In reply to: Diane 's message, "Okay" on 11:00:56 04/04/05 Mon

Michael�s head lay between her breasts. He nipped and sucked first one, than the other. He couldn�t get enough of her. His erection lay hot and heavy between them, her hands fisted in his long, silken curls, holding him close to her body. He slid down her torso, licking and kissing every inch�their bodies slick with sweat. She directed his mouth where she needed it to be, and he did not disappoint her. He lapped and suckled her honey sweetness, until neither of them could stand it anymore. He rose on his knees to where her body begged him enter. Nikita called out to him.

�Daddy?�

Michael�s eyes flew open. He was alone, damp with perspiration, his breathing ragged.

�Daddy?� Adam tried again, this time knocking on the bedroom door. Michael answered in a voice he hoped sounded like his.

�What do you need, Adam?�

�Can I watch cartoons this morning?�

Michael rolled over onto his back, trying to relieve this pressure of what still throbbed between his legs.

�You know the rules, Adam. Public Television or Animal Planet.�

He listened to Adam�s retreating footsteps, and contemplated what to do about his own problem. He hadn�t jerked-off since he was fourteen, and wasn�t about to revive that old habit now. He made his was out of the tangled sheets and into the shower stall, where the icy pellets hit him like fragments of an AK-47. He had dreamed about Nikita all night�his sheets must be a mess. Or not, considering the pain he still in.

After nearly twenty minutes of torture, he was finally able to slip into a pair of sweatpants and a Montreal Canadiennes t-shirt. He fixed himself a mug of coffee, and went to sit beside Adam, who was totally engrossed in a program about the mating habit of reptiles. Terrific.

�What are Bert and Ernie up to?� he asked, hoping Adam would change the channel.

�I already know about the number 3 and the letters K and W,� Adam reported. He turned to look at his father. �Don�t you think �Sesame Street� is a little lame for someone going into Grade 3 next autumn?�

Lame. He would have to file that one away under Adam�s growing slang vocabulary.

�Let�s turn off the TV and practice your penmanship.�

�Now?� whined Adam. �It�s summer break.�

�And I still can�t read a word you write,� prodded Michael.

�I can�t read a word you write,� returned Adam, �and you�re doing okay.�

Michael ignored him and brought out a pad of penmanship paper. �Write your name in your best cursive writing,� he commanded. Adam took the pencil in a death grip, and with tongue nearly bursting through his cheek, did as his father asked.

Michael inspected his finished work. �That�s �Adan,� not �Adam,�� he pointed out. Adam shrugged. Michael pointed to the spirally drawing where the �S� should be. �What�s that?�

�It�s an �S,�� Adam said defensively.

�We�ll have to work on that one. And here�s �n� instead of �m,� again. I recognize an �l,� but I can�t read anything else on this paper.�

�Cursive is hard,� Adam muttered.

Michael gave Adam a one-armed hug. �I know it is�especially when everyone else learned it at school and you missed that part. But you�re so bright, Adam. I know that you can catch up and even pass those Grade 3�s by the time school starts.�

�Pass them?� Adam asked skeptically.

�If you want to,� Michael replied nonchalantly. He knew Adam�s IQ had tested in the 170 range, but he had no intention of pushing him further than Adam wanted to go. Michael just wanted him to be aware of all of his options.

�Here.� Michael took Adam�s notepad and letter guide and wrote �Adam Samuelson in his very best cursive writing, which wasn�t bad when he put some effort into it. On the second page, he wrote �Mirabela.� �See if you can get these two pages done, and then we�ll go do something special. Don�t hurry and make sloppy mistakes. Every word has to be right. Deal?�

�Deal,� confirmed Adam. Dairy Queen was no longer considered �special,� so he couldn�t wait to see what his father had in mind. Oops. Three humps on the �m�.

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[> By the way -- Diane, 20:00:55 05/19/05 Thu

Have I thanked you lately for sticking with me on this? I know you don't 'like' my Michael, but I appreciate your checking for grammatical, stylistic, punctuation errors, etc., anyway. I'm going to wait until I hear back from you before I attempt the chapter 12 rewrite. You brought up some very valid points, and I'm not sure how to rework them.

Thanks again,
Diane :)

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[> [> Re: By the way -- Shanola, 19:16:15 06/01/05 Wed

Hey, Diane.

Just wanted to let you know that I'm heading out of town for a week or so. I'll drop a note here when I get back and beta some more.

Cheers! =P

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[> [> [> Re: By the way -- Diane, 21:01:33 06/07/05 Tue

I'll be out of town (IN MONTREAL MEETING ROY!!!) until the 13th if you get back before then. Please feel free to delete the chapters that are good to go; I really feel like I've hogged the whole board.

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