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Date Posted: 18:23:40 04/10/06 Mon
Author: ShanBan
Subject: Chapter Sixteen - Bed of Roses
In reply to: ShanBan 's message, "Chapter Fifteen - Rock the Boat" on 18:22:23 04/10/06 Mon

Ok heres the last one......for now I think.....
Theres a line I used in this chapter from Brian McKnight's song my kind of Girl. It was so cute I just had to steal it lol!

*1 Month Later*

Shannon pulled into the driveway and dragged herself out of the car. She was wiped, it had been such a long day and she had to work late into the evening. Kenny had left for the rest of his tour and Keith would be leaving in a couple of weeks, then she would be headed on a southwest rodeo tour. She walked up the steps and noticed there were no lights on in the house. She turned to look for Keith's car and there it was in the driveway. "Good god whats he up to now..." she said outloud.

Then she unlocked the door and pushed it open. When she walked in she gasped. There was a walkway of rose petals illuminate by candles on each side. She dropped her bag with her mouth hangin open to bend down and pick up the note infront of her. It read "-to the tune of Yellow brink road- Follow the red rose trail....follow the red rose trail..." she chuckled he could be so corney, but she loved it. She kept walking very slowly and stoped at the bottom of the steps. Everyother step had a note on it and she bent down to pick up the first one. This one read "For every kiss we've ever had, for all the times I've made you mad..." she smiled and went on to the next one, "In my darkness you're light shown through, and I would do anything for you..." She kept moving on to the next step, "When you talk, I hang on every word you say..." To the next one "When you move, your like the breeze on a summers day..." And another "When you smile, the sky turns from grey to blue, thats what you do..." By now her eyes were starting to well up. She picked up the note at the top of the stairs, it read "The feeling in my heart and tears I could not hide, if you would do me the honor and be my bride..." Tears were streaming down her face as she picked up the last note on the bedroom door. "We'll be together always, come what may, and I'll love you untill my dying day..."

She opened the door, the bedroom was filled with candles and the floor was covered in white rose petals, a line of red ones leading from the door to the bed, then scattered on the bed. Keith was standing in the middle of the room, his eyes glistening in the candlelight, he walked towards her and got down on one knee. Shannon couldnt stop the tears now as she gazed at him. "Shannon, your everything to me, your my world, my heart, my soul, I'm lost without you. You've made me a better man and keep me striving to better meself in any way I can. You saved my life and I will be eternally greatfull for that, becuase if you hadnt I wouldnt be here today, infront of you. I've never loved anyone more in my entire life and it is a deep love that I have never known. I'm asking you now, if you would make me the happiest man alive, and dead for that matter, and be my wife?" Tears were streaming down his cheeks. He slipped a gorgeous pink diamond ring on her finger and looked up at her for the answer. She was beside herself all she could do was nod her head. "Yes???!!!" He asked her eagerly. "Yes!!!!!" She jumped in his arms and he spun her around, kissing her with more passion than ever before. He walked her over and layed her down on the bed of roses and they made love until the sun came up.

THE END!!!!

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[> [> [> I was thinkin' this was gonna be a bit of Bon Jovi! -- Aussie Chick, 21:22:41 04/10/06 Mon [1]

This was great Shan! Shame it has to end. I love to think of Keith as a real romantic guy too. He seems so warm and caring I think he would be really in touch with his romantic side. I'm sure he'd know how to make a girl fall head over heels for him.


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[> [> [> [> wow i want the first 14 chapters -- starla, 14:42:32 04/12/06 Wed [1]

im new here but good god girl you can write only wish id been able to start at the beginning...whew


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[> [> [> [> [> First Fourteen -- ShanBan, 22:20:29 04/12/06 Wed [1]

All of the chapters are on here somehwere or another, if you cant find let me know and I could email them to you! Thanks so much by the way!!


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