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Date Posted: 21:31:36 06/13/08 Fri
Author: kate
Subject: Very dramatic with the storm energy. Great job!
In reply to: . 's message, "Break Up to Make Up" on 19:20:09 06/13/08 Fri


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[> Great story. Love the contrast of the storm brewing outside and their storm brewing inside. I just.........inside -- bama, 22:04:14 06/13/08 Fri [1]

find the use of the f word very bothersome. I think 'mess' would have worked just as well. Maybe not as dramatic but, I can't help it, I have never liked that word. Otherwise I loved the story. This would have translated well to the tv screen I think. To bad TPTB didn't think so.

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