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Date Posted: 19:41:17 06/14/08 Sat
Author: JAG Junkie (Ronda)
Subject: Wow! Very powerful and dramatic! Inside
In reply to: . 's message, "Break Up to Make Up" on 19:20:09 06/13/08 Fri

Call me old-fashioned (it wouldn't be the first time someone called me that! LOL), but I agree with the ones who expressed concerns about the liveral use of the "f-word". I found it to be jarring--but not in a good way. I found myself being drawn in to the drama, but every time I came across that word, it violently threw me out of the story. I guess you could say it had the opposite effect than what was intended. Shrug.

But otherwise, this was a wonderful and well-written story!

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[> The story and the writing are both excellent! So descriptive and emotional! Loved it!! -- ...., 14:21:02 06/15/08 Sun [1]


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