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Subject: Re: What it's like to drown


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Sasha
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Date Posted: 18:23:43 01/23/08 Wed
In reply to: Jessica 's message, "What it's like to drown" on 11:50:41 01/23/08 Wed




~ WOW!!!!! Jess, you're on fire, hon

this is wonderful, excellent use of metaphor
loving this entirely, and such wonderful imagery...

*hugs*

Sash xx


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Janel
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Date Posted: 21:12:01 01/23/08 Wed

Very interesting and creative write Jessica,
I love your use of metaphor and your imagery,
that feeling of drowning is definitely felt.
I much enjoyed the read.

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