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] Date Posted: 07:42:48 01/29/08 Tue In reply to: Arunansu 's message, "Cologne" on 04:07:36 01/29/08 Tue Brilliant JUST BRIILIANT DSL [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:05:48 01/29/08 Tue I enjoy how you take a subject and peel it open slowly. One other thing I would like to mention is that a real nice thing for any poet to work on is to introduce senses into their poetry. Here you use the sense of smell wonderfully. It layers poetry and invites the reader into the poem. Enjoyed Much! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |