Re: Cologne -- The Poetry Parlour

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Subject: Re: Cologne

Author:
andy

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Date Posted: 14:05:48 01/29/08 Tue
In reply to: Arunansu 's message, "Cologne" on 04:07:36 01/29/08 Tue

I enjoy how you take a subject
and peel it open slowly.

One other thing I would like to mention
is that a real nice thing for any poet
to work on is to introduce senses into
their poetry.

Here you use the sense of smell wonderfully.

It layers poetry and invites the reader
into the poem.

Enjoyed Much!

thanks,
andy

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[> Subject: Re: Cologne

Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 14:37:32 01/29/08 Tue

Quote:
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little ones
slept unperturbed;
velvety lips
curved in bliss.

Dreamy odor painted
fresh colours.
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~ Arun, I have to say that you are a joy to read, my friend

this poem is just gorgeous, I love the way you capture
ordinary things in the most extraordinary way....loving this!!!

*hugs*

Sash xx

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