| Subject: GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!! LET ME POST MY STORY, STUPID INTERNET! Next part inside |
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Date Posted: 15:32:40 01/31/04 Sat
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's message, "This is just a little story, if you don't like it just tell me and I wont continue it. Please tell me if my work needs improving.Thanks! :)" on 19:47:30 01/02/04 Fri
Rosha fried arrows into the trees. They were flung back, black bubbling ooze on the tips. All shrubary un-lucky enough to get hit was instantly dissinagrated. Furtill panicked and dashed ahead, tripping, stumbling, blundering, falling, everything else, exept for letting the sabre go through him. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He screamed.
Rosha rolled her eyes, shot one last arrow, and dashed ahead. "Awwwwww, clamp a lid on it, Furtill!"
"Yeah! You might offened the screaming Black Coats! Hehehehe!" Thorin yelled over the screaming of the black shapes.
"No kidding! Really!" Argathall yelled ahead to the screaming Furtill.
Furtill stopped dead. Before him was a sheer drop to pointed rocks. "Crud." Was his only word as Rosha skidded to a halt near him, followed by Thorin and Argathall.
They all looked at the cliff, untill Rosha looked back, widened her eyes, started trembling, and jumped off. The rest followed. "Crud is right, Furtiiiiiilllll!" She yelled over her to Furtill, Argathall, and Thorin.
"Loook oouuuutttt!" Thorin screamed down to Rosha, almost hitting a rock ledge sticking out.
She rolled over and missed that one but hit another one, knocking her unconsious and falling to the rocks below.
Argathall grabbed a rope from her belt, looped it, threw it on a rock, tied it to her waist, made an extra loop, and took a diving form. She shot down, her brown hair flowing backwards. "I'm comin', Rooshaaaaaaaaaaaaa!"
Thorin grabbed a rope from his belt, tied him and Furtill to it, threw it on the same rock, and dove down also. "Hold out, Rosha!" Thorin shouted.
Rosha only heard Argathall's shout, before falling on something sharp. She groaned.
Argathall landed beside her, and leaned down. She undid the rope and rolled Rosha over. A stabbing pain went through her leg, and she turned around to see a brown stain on her pants.
"Wiftaaaaaallllleeeeeeeee!" Furtill shouted, looking into the sky and seeing a hidious Yicko face clouding the sky.
Rosha opened her eyes and groaned, "We must, escape, Wiftale, soon." She got up and started running for a cave, the sky clouding and hail cascading from the sky.
OOC: Sorry for such a short part!
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