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Subject: *Snorts in disbelief* No way Whiteye. Mine is worse than yours. I don't even know why I'm postin' the next part. :)


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Tacroy Bladefire
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Date Posted: 19:44:29 08/21/03 Thu
In reply to: Whiteye 's message, "Ooooo trust me, not small and insignificant. You'res is so much better than mine!" on 01:19:48 08/21/03 Thu

Seerus strode angrily down a long, dim corridor of the Academy, his robes billowing behind him. Vexar knew nothing. Nothing at all! It wasn't him who started the fights! He was defending himself, he was the victim, not the attacker. Clenching his fists violently, he ground his teeth together furiously.
As Seerus stalked down a long, pillared hallway, a dark shape materialized out of the deep gloom of the candlelit hall. Seerus glared at the twenty year old, burly student who blocked his way, and tried to sidepass him.
The othr student moved with him, and Seerus halted. "Get out of my way Lorkan!" he growled amgrily.
"Lorkan folded his huge arms across his chest. "Or what freak? What are you going to do to me?"
Seerus' fists clenched even tighter, but he breathed deeply and slowly unclenched them. Stay calm, he thought to himself, just walk past him. Don't loose your temper. Seerus strode forward once again, but Lorkan quickly shoved him forcefully back. "I'm talkin' to you freak!" Seerus' eyes burned, but he made one last attempt before giving in to his feelings.
"Lorkan, get outta my way now!" Lorkan's huge, burly frame shook with laughter. "I'm not as intimidated as William, Seerrus. I know more magic than you ever will you little demon. You only know how to light candles and junk like that!" He spat on Seerus' robes scornfully.
Seerus had had enough. Whipping back his robes, he raised his hands, letting his anger go all at once. He chanted out loud a ten letter spell, which would normally have produced a small flame dancing on his fingertips. Instead, his anger caused his whole body to be surrounded in a torrent of leaping, roaring, flames. Lorkan's sneering face wasa suddenly clouded with fear as Seerus spoke the one word which unleashed the magic. The flames surged off of Seerus and crashed into Lorkan. With a horrible scream, Lorkan was consumed in roaring flames which blasted him off his feet and sent im crashing backwards into a nearby pillar. As quickly as they had come, the flames died down and vanished, leaving Lorkan mericfully unconcious, covered in black and blistered flesh. Without a backward glance, Seerus strode past his fallen opponent and back to his dormitory, imagining Vexar's face when the news came to him that the freak of the school had horribly burned an innocent student.

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Excellent! The only thing I dont like in your story in the magic part...sorry, Im just not really one for that kinda stuff. Harry Potter is my enemy **winks** But other than that, you have an amazing writing skill (NT)Whiteye19:14:28 08/22/03 Fri


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