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Subject: A Random Poem


Author:
Soilflicker
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Date Posted: 23:30:13 01/25/03 Sat

Not very good, but anyway:
What Makes A Mouse A Warrior?

What makes a mouse a warrior?
We all know they're so small
Hiding under baseboards
Running behind the wall.

In Redwall, mice are different
They all are strong and brave
The ones who go down fighting,
The ones who defend their cave.

The mousewives of the Abbey.
Cooking, cleaning, always cheerful.
They make the Abbey what it is.
Always fighting, never fearful.

We humans' brains are all so wrong.
We think you have to be big to be strong.
We think that just cuz you're small
You can't fight at all.

But, whatever we say,
Dibbuns will be adults one day.

That wasn't my best effort, but I wrote it straight onto the computer. Anyway, constructive critism will be gladly welcomed.

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Bwavo!!!! Bwavo!!!! Encor encor!! Dat was a great poem.Pwease do anoder one. (NT)Dusty Dirtypaws00:48:12 01/26/03 Sun
Jolly good wot wot! (NT)Lancepaw Fortesque09:57:42 01/26/03 Sun
Well me loved it! (NT)Tangle13:00:40 01/26/03 Sun
Cool! OK, I'm glad you guys like it, then! I'm working on a new one. (NT)Soilflicker19:52:53 01/26/03 Sun
Oooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!! I hope da poem get done soon.[I weally wanta wead it] (NT)Dusty Dirtypaws00:16:21 01/28/03 Tue
Aye, your poem is better than my ol' mum's.Remba13:53:52 01/28/03 Tue
Indeed that is wht makes a mouse a warrior, bravo! (NT)Wraith521:12:16 01/28/03 Tue


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