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Subject: A mission


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Tari Twinblade the ottermaid
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Date Posted: 16:46:18 01/28/03 Tue

This is my answer to mission 14:

14) The fort is under siege by vermin. In your dreams Martin the Warrior tells you to jump out the window, and that, doing so, you will defeat the vermin. When you wake up, trusting Martin, you jump out the window and... complete the story
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can you tell me what you think (I don't mind if you don't like it- please tell me and what you don't like)

I jumped out of the window into the fort grounds and landed on a rat, knocking him out, and I discovered that there was a small party of vermin in the fort grounds, having unlocked one of the side doors. There leader, a fox named Brushblade, was with them. "Keep yore mouths shut." he said in a loud whisper "A sentry might hear us." He crept towards the main door of the fort with the rest of his party. "Where's Grimknife?" one of them asked (probably talking about the rat I'd knocked out) "Ain't I told you to be quiet?" the Fox hissed back "I don't care where 'e is as long as 'e stays quiet." I turned a water barrel that I had landed next to on its side and pushed it so it rolled into the direction of the vermin. Completely surprised, the barrel knocked three of them over, two stoats and a weasel, and the noise alerted the sentries, who pounced on the party of vermin and slammed the side door shut. The fox tried to escape, but I tripped him and pressed one of my daggers to his throat "Surrender." I commanded the remaining vermin "or your leader dies." (which sounded quite stupid when I said it) they quickly put there weapons down and sat with their hands on their heads. We bound the fox and marched him out the gate and told the rest of his army to surrender, then we collected up their weaponry and armour. We divided them into three groups and sent one south, one east and one west, and sent Brushblade, the fox, north on his own.

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ooc: It's good but I think you could do with a bit more description. That's just my personal opinion though. (NT)Lancepaw Fortesque10:02:27 01/30/03 Thu
Me liked it (NT)Tangle12:42:14 02/02/03 Sun
Me agwee wit tangle, i espefilly wike da part when you land on da rat and he go KERSPLAT!!!!!!! (NT)Dusty Dirtypaws16:52:38 02/05/03 Wed
Thanks, Tangle and Dusty Dirtypaws (NT)Tari16:03:57 02/06/03 Thu


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