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Subject: A story, from me.


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Dartpaw
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Date Posted: 21:04:22 03/19/03 Wed

Martin the warrior had walked down the great hall, and the creatures there were sewing the start of a tapestry which will enlighten the creatures and have a great masterpiece to put on the wall for all creatures to see.
He walked up to the dormitories and ran into gonff.

'Whoops, pardon me, Martin... say matey where are you off to in such a hurry?'
'I'm not sure I just felt excited, something came over me and I just had to go to the dormitories it seemed like something was calling me.'
'Calling you, hmm... you are a strange mouse martin but since you hung up your sword you have become strange and cryptic, with all these riddles, and visions'
'I know, I have been off lately, Since I have gave up the warriors spirit I have been pacing more often.'

As they were finished talking martin went to his dormitory.
His sword was hanging there over the bed, it reminded him of his father and how he missed him.
He then realized his sword was glowing strangely... he picked up the sword and swiped the air a few times.
He could sense something in the room with him, he then saw
a glowing face looking at him right out of the air.
He swung at the mysterious face and then it disappeared and the sword stopped glowing...

'What in the name of Mossflower was that!!??'
The face reappeared and started talking 'You have been a hero here and became famous Mouse.. but how about trying it in another world!' the face laughed evilly and vanished.
He then noticed the room was spinning and he was getting dizzy.. what was that face and why did it say that!? it looked kind of like a stoat, or a mouse... couldn't tell.
But martin felt as light as a feather and he closed his eyes to stop the nausea and he opened them.

He was standing on a cement walkway, and around strange buildings he had never seen before some were large and some were not... and he noticed a weird looking creature walking by he had no fur on his face only on the top of his head, and was wearing weird clothes and he didn't want to get started with the feet.
'Woah... cool costume dude!'
'What do you mean? What are you,' martin pointed his sword at him.
'Woah easy with that, you could hurt someone... but gnarly threads.'
Martin put away his sword and as the man walked away.
As he walked down the street strange creatures were giving him dirty looks and some were just running away from him, he didn't belong here and Martin was bewildered, some weird force had taken him to a strange scary world... the scariest world of all... Our world!

To be continued

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I admit the face thing was really weird, but I just needed a quick and interesting way for Martin to well... travel... but it will pick up once I get into the real story, but It's alot like the allon one, but what can I say, I love writing these kind of stories (NT)Dartpaw17:44:32 03/22/03 Sat
Me wants more Daddy Dartypaws!!! NNNNOOOWWW!!!! (NT)Tangle14:52:40 03/23/03 Sun
More soon, I hope you guys like this ^__^ (NT)Dartpaw22:35:57 03/23/03 Sun


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