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Subject: 我也


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貼詩
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Date Posted: 00:46:19 07/18/01 Wed

七月





我答應我的土地上要開滿盛長的花,因為雙生的血脈糾纏,以及軟弱的善意。七色的薊草,細長堅執的,長年永遠一直開到我的土地盡頭,氣息足以召喚所有未被唱過的愉悅歌謠,變幻了像鸚鵡的蝴蝶。要有這些。

而夢境夜夜襲來:灰色的角落裡我拖著長不大的辮子,胸膛裡生出的魔幻藤蔓所封閉的光線與呼救聲,只震破我的耳朵--時光失控,所有的玻璃在我手中破爛。都有這些。

以歌聲借代呼叫,以隱喻替換血痕,靜靜安坐,手指交疊置於膝上,我等待,身上的青紫終於構成光線的顏色。而後來我的土地終於開了我無法形容的花,我夢見。

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說得沒錯: 有人讀詩, 詩便有了意義.只是, 詩並沒有應許這樣的意義. 或者如此.09:52:33 07/18/01 Wed
再看一次連節奏也覺得不好了。(nt)會不會寫不下去?作者12:53:07 07/22/01 Sun


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