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Date Posted: 17:18:13 10/26/02 Sat
Author: Tiffany
Subject: Excellent, truly Sona, I just got caught up, lol.
In reply to: Sonali 's message, "TORN - CHAPTER 16 - THE END!" on 02:06:26 09/27/02 Fri

Okay, so you said you wanted some advice. So, I'm going to give you some.

First and foremost, I find that a story has so much more fluidity when I write it in the third person, because you get so many perspectives that way.

I love this story because there are so many emotions tied into it. I think you did an excellent job displaying them...but it was kinda awkward having "Sonali" explaining other peoples emotions. Once again, with third person perspective, you can dig so much deeper into psyches and have amazing results.

Overall though Sona, it was such a great work of fiction. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next story!

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