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Date Posted: 22:50:18 09/27/02 Fri
Author: Kira
Subject: Good story...
In reply to: Sonali 's message, "TORN - CHAPTER 16 - THE END!" on 02:06:26 09/27/02 Fri

I like your stories, but I think writing in the third person would help your more, because you see the story from every side. That would make the story more believable.

And don't be afraid to delve into emotions, even if their your own. For me, writing is therapy, I put myself in their and once you're not afraid to do that, your writing improves tenfold.

Can't wait to read others in the future!

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  • Excellent, truly Sona, I just got caught up, lol. -- Tiffany, 17:18:13 10/26/02 Sat

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