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Subject: Can I Touch You?


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KandiJams
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Date Posted: 11:33:55 07/24/02 Wed
 I decided to post my story up here because yawl be giving feedback like a mutha on here. I read Chocolate Delights stories and liked them (Got Skills Girl!) Well here's my story. Read the first chapter...tell me what 'cha think and I'll post the next.

“Can I Touch You?”
Chapter 1
By: KandiJams

Omari jumped up out of his sleep. He tired to catch his breath as sweat trickled down his forehead and then neck. He looked around and he was alone. Alone in his big house, his big room, his big bed, with his silk sheets. He got out of bed and went into the bathroom. He peeled off his sweat-drenched wife beater and boxers. He stepped into the shower and let the cool water run all over his body. For the past 2 months he had been having the same dream. There was this girl, which he had never seen before, but she was the most beautiful thing he could ever imagine. She had a set of memorizing brown eyes and a tattoo of a humming bird on the back of her right shoulder. Every night she came to him and every night they made love. The dream and it’s effects felt so real to Omari that most nights he woke up thinking she’d be lying right next to him. But she never was. After his shower he got dressed and went to the kitchen for breakfast. He poured himself some Fruit Loops and soon after he started eating the phone rang.

Omari: Hello
Female Voice: Hey sexy.
Omari: (not really knowing who it was) Hey.
FV: You don’t know who this is, do you?
Omari: (laughing a little) Not really.
FV: You’re lucky you’re so fine. Otherwise you would’ve gotten told off. This is Christina.
Omari: Oh hey girl, I knew it was you.
Christina: Yeah, right. So anyway, what are you planning today?
Omari: I’m going over to Druex’s house to hang out with the fellas.
Christina: For how long?
Omari: A while but not too long. I wanna get back here before it’s too late.
Christina: So you want me to come by?
Omari: Later on. Like 10 or 11.
Christina: Aiight, I’ll pull through for you.
Omari: You betta. Last time you left me hanging, literally.
Christina: (laughing) Don’t worry, tonight will not be a lonely night. Bye.
Omari: One.

Omari hung up the phone and went back to eating his cereal. He was halfway finish when the phone rang again.

Omari: Talk to me.
Female 2: Hello Omari.
Omari: (recognizing the distinct voice) Terry?
Terry: Yeah, how are you?
Omari: I’m aiight. How about you?
Terry: I’ve been stressed with work and all.
Omari: You know what’ll help, right?
Terry: I sure do. What time do you want me there?
Omari: Can’t be today. I’ve got studio work to do.
Terry: (sounding disappointed) Aw…How about tomorrow?
Omari: Tomorrow’s just fine.
Terry: See you then.

Terry hung up and it rang again. Omari shook his head and picked it up.

Omari: Hello.
Female 3: Hey Love.
Omari: (sighing) Didn’t I tell you not to call me anymore?
Female 3: Whateva!
Omari: I’m serious Deavian. I’m going to put a block on my phone.
Deavian: If you were going to you would’ve done it already.
Omari: Look I don’t have time for you.
Deavian: You had plenty of time for me last month.
Omari: Exactly, last month. Damn get over it.
Deavian: So you’re telling me I was a one-time thing?
Omari: Basically and I told you that before everything went down.
Deavian: You know you are so cold-hearted. Do you love anybody?
Omari: My fam and myself.
Deavian: All of you ain’t no good.
Omari: Don’t disrespect my family.
Deavian: Whateva! You know what Omari, I hope you get crabs or something.
Omari: If I got ‘em, you were the one who gave them to me.
Deavian: Goodbye!

Deavian slammed the phone down on the receiver and Omari just went to finishing his cereal. He wasn’t gonna let Deavian get to him. As a matter of fact, he never let any girl get to him. Omari always knew there’d be another girl waiting in the wings.

PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK
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Replies:
Subject Author Date
Re: Can I Touch You?Harmony12:05:01 07/24/02 Wed
Re: Can I Touch You?ChocolateDelight14:52:34 07/24/02 Wed
Can I Touch You? (Chapter 2)KandiJams09:19:50 07/25/02 Thu
Can I Touch You? (Chapter 8)KandiJams18:30:14 08/09/02 Fri
Can I Touch You? (Chapter 9)KandiJams18:13:13 08/11/02 Sun
Can I Touch You? (Chapter 10)KandiJams10:01:55 08/28/02 Wed
Can I Touch You? (Chapter 11)KandiJams09:19:20 08/30/02 Fri
Can I Touch You? (Chapter 12)KandiJams12:16:56 09/07/02 Sat
Can I Touch You?(Chapter 13)FINALE!KandiJams18:51:56 09/20/02 Fri

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