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Date Posted: 13:53:39 11/18/02 Mon
Author: Kaylorin
Author Host/IP: pcp632159pcs.newhvn01.in.comcast.net / 68.53.200.184
Subject: Re: General Review & Discussion: SlayereyalS by Mediancat
In reply to: KatLurkin 's message, "General Review & Discussion: SlayereyalS by Mediancat" on 18:07:38 11/12/02 Tue

Fist off, want to appologise for kinda copping out on this. I didn't even read it till today, but I think Kat gets why, so I'm not grounded. LoL

Second of all, look at all the trekkers who could see Xander's beard as a dead give away. This was almost an exact copy of the episode Mirror Mirror, as has already been pointed out. That in itself makes me want to score favorably (cuz I'm a big dorky trekker), but then I read on I realise how badly it was done.

The characters were just sort of spouting out Buffyisms with a few lines to move the story ahead. This could have been a wild and fun epic, but I was unimpressed with the lack of shocking moments, or inginuity. All the stuff being done lacked imagination.

Tara bugged the hell out of me (alernate Tara that is) All the evil characters were the same, just had different names.. oh and one had a beard.

And it looked like the writer ended it hoping to be asked for a sequel. I mean, considering the last time he got a special piece of jewelry it go mashed, and you really don't want Anya's necklace mashed, should she be calling Angel to hold it for her? I mean.. really?

That said, and I know it was all negative, I will give props for the attempt. Writing a story with two sets of the same characters can be a pain in the but. Hence why I don't. But I was not too happy that it was another one of THOSE. Let's all go to another dimension. Its done too much. (Of course I say this while two of mine do that very thing... one even going to Trek land. LoL.)

Also, killing off a large number of characters takes guts cuz most people aren't real happy about that. But again coping out with bringing 'em back.

The most important thing thogh, now that all the picky stuff is out of the way... was it entertaining?

Yeah, it was actually. If someone had just told me to read this, I would have finished it. It wasn't a terrible story, but I thought it missed major things that would have made it easier to read and I really think the ending needs work.

I would take this and call it a rough draft, then work on it littel by little. Add soem details, a few more character traits to the evil Scoobs.. that kind of stuff.

As is though, I'll have to go with a 65 as my score.

Sorry. :(

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[> Re: General Review & Discussion: SlayereyalS by Mediancat -- Chani ***late, i know***, 15:56:28 11/19/02 Tue (curie.noos.net/212.198.0.93)

First, I thought I didn't get it because I was a foreigner.....And i still think it was harder for me to understand that story!

The plot about the reversal universe is interesting and that story could have been great, but the writing makes it confused. I totally agree with morgain!

Sorry to give a low mark.....again

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