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Date Posted: 18:32:18 11/20/02 Wed
Author: SaraKat
Author Host/IP: lsanca1-ar4-254-042.biz.dsl.gtei.net / 4.33.254.42
Subject: Re: General Review & Discussion: SlayereyalS by Mediancat
In reply to: KatLurkin 's message, "General Review & Discussion: SlayereyalS by Mediancat" on 18:07:38 11/12/02 Tue

First off, I'd like to apologize to everyone for getting this in so late. RL got in the way and today was the first chance I got to post my review.

Second, I tend to agree with what most of you have already posted. I had to read this story several times and even then it didn't make much sense to me. I loved the idea of an AU where the Scoobies were all the extreme of their "good" selves, but found the story too confusing and jumbled. At the end, I literally sat there at my computer going "Huh????". Not a good sign. And getting a beta-reader would be a good idea...if there's one thing that makes reading a complicated story even more difficult, it's obvious spelling and grammar mistakes. That said, I give this story a 70.

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[> Re: General Review & Discussion: SlayereyalS by Mediancat -- Jade, 19:29:30 11/21/02 Thu (inktomi3-nth.server.ntl.com/62.253.32.6)

I really couldn't get into this story.

I didn't understand half of it, and like the other said, get a beta reader!

I gave up reading halfway through and skipped to the end, like someone else did. It didn't get much better from there.

I give it a low 55.


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