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Date Posted: 15:33:19 06/18/02 Tue
Author: Deedra
Subject: The Copy-Cat Conspiracy. Part 10
In reply to: Deedra 's message, "Need a Beta Reader.... The Copy-Cat Conspiracy." on 13:23:45 06/13/02 Thu

Part 10

Meanwhile, Nikita and Marco are making their way down to level 30 by way of the stairs. The two teams just miss each other. Marco leads Nikita through level 30 checking each door on the way to see if it is unlocked. Finally they come to a room with double doors.

"This door is open, Nikita."

Nikita nods. Both ready weapons as Marco opens the door and they rush the room. At the end of a long conference table, Paul, Madeline and Walter are sitting laughing.

"Come in." Paul puts down his coffee.

Marco walks over behind Paul as Nikita starts to question them.

'What's this? " Nikita boasts.

"Nikita, come in and set down." Madeline orders.

"I don't think so."

"Really Nikita, it's OK! " Paul confirms.

"Walter not you too?" Nikita sighs.

"Nikita, just give us a minute to expl...." Before Walter can finish his sentence, another Nikita, Denise Richards lookalike, enters the room from a side door. Nikita immediately puts her in the sight of her gun. Looking back at Paul, Madeline and Walter, Nikita switches sight with the gun.

"I don't understand. Who... who is she.... Who are you?" Nikita's eyes begin to fill with water.

Madeline stands then slowly moves towards Nikita.

"She is not a clone, Nikita. She is your sister. That's right, Just like Birkoff and Jason."

Nikita yalls, "No! You... No way. Wha.... How? " Tears begin to run down Nikita's face as the gun begins to shake in her hands.

Walter tries to calm Nikita and adds, "Nikita, listen to Madeline before you do something you will regret."

"I wouldn't regret much at this point."

Paul grows visible impatient with Nikita's attitude, "Nikita stop it1 We need..."

Knowing Paul will only fuel Nikita's emotions, Madeline interjects, "The Paul, Madeline and Walter upstairs are our clones. Just you and Birkoff have twins. We are the originals."

As Nikita sits down at the far end of the table glaring at all of them, she begins to come down. Marco positions him self behind Nikita for support.

Nikita, your sister name is Nicky. " adds Madeline.

Wondering just what is really going on, Nikita bites her lip and looks her up and down.

Madeline continues, "Nicky has decided to stay here with us which means you can go."

"Go!" Go where? Nikita asks.

Nikita looks at Walter, "Is the true? No wait a minute I've been through this before with you all and ...."

Paul becomes fedup with Nikita's on-again off-again attitude, "No, Nikita it's April fools and you're the fool. No, no it's true. Your free to go."

"Leave Section? I.... Where would I go? How would I?"

Paul continues as NIkita regains her composure, "However, this time you don't get to use Sections resources. And no Section will not defend you from hostiles. We will, however, provided you with some cash and you can keep your current transportation. Go...get out of here before I change my mind. And leave the gun on the table."

Nikita waists no time. She jumps to her feet and heads for the door.

Marco calls to her, "Wait, I'll see you out. "

As they leave, they run into Michael and his team.

"Michael, I'm leaving Section."

Michael calmly replies, "I know."

Nikita looks at Michael and can't help but ask, "Is there anything you don't know?"

Michael embraces her intimately, kisses her cheek then runs his finger down the left side of her chin. Marco interups,

"Nikita, you should go?"

Nikita nods her head and they all part ways.

Nikita puts her luggage in the back seat, gets in the car placing the little red box in the front passenger seat as she heads to the airport. She turns on the radio and Someone Saved My Life Tonight by Elton John begins playing.

(To be continued....)
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When I think of those East End lights, muggy nights
The curtains drawn in the little room downstairs
Prima Donna lord you really should have been there
Sitting like a princess perched in her electric chair
And it's one more beer and I don't hear you anymore
We've all gone crazy lately
My friends out there rolling round the basement floor

And someone saved my life tonight sugar bear
You almost had your hooks in me didn't you dear
You nearly had me roped and tied
Altar-bound, hypnotized
Sweet freedom whispered in my ear
You're a butterfly
And butterflies are free to fly
Fly away, high away, bye bye

I never realized the passing hours of evening showers
A slip noose hanging in my darkest dreams
I'm strangled by your haunted social scene
Just a pawn out-played by a dominating queen
It's four o'clock in the morning
Damn it listen to me good
I'm sleeping with myself tonight
Saved in time, thank God my music's still alive

And I would have walked head on into the deep end of the river
Clinging to your stocks and bonds
Paying your H.P. demands forever
They're coming in the morning with a truck to take me home
Someone saved my life tonight, someone saved my life tonight
Someone saved my life tonight, someone saved my life tonight
Someone saved my life tonight
So save your strength and run the field you play alone

Someone saved my life tonight sugar bear
You almost had your hooks in me didn't you dear
You nearly had me roped and tied
Altar-bound, hypnotized
Sweet freedom whispered in my ear
You're a butterfly
And butterflies are free to fly
Fly away, high away, bye bye

Someone Saved My Life Tonight.
Elton John : Very Best Of (2 Cds) (Eng)
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[> Beta Reader's Please feel free to help.... The Copy-Cat Conspiracy. -- Deedra, 15:51:54 06/18/02 Tue

Hello All Bata Readers,

First I know about the Seymore/Birkoff. I will change it to Jason.

Secondly, yes it needs alot. Go for it. Please try to keep your first comments spelling and grammar then personal.

I am new at writing and it will take time for me to sort out my style.

Thanks you in advance.
God bless you all.
Deedra

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