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Date Posted: 08:29:10 06/20/02 Thu
Author: Nestra
Subject: Comments (r)
In reply to: Deedra 's message, "The Copy-Cat Conspiracy. Part 5" on 15:00:51 06/18/02 Tue

"The physician said it was okay." Paul huffs.

Given that Operations is very strong-willed, I don't think that he'd resort to this kind of argument with Michael. It sort of turns him into a petulant child. At least that's the impression that I get.

Michael turns to the chief physician for confirmation. Who nods his head and waves them on.

This should be one sentence.

"What are you talking about? I been in deep cover for the last 9 months."

I've been in deep cover...

Then door shuts and locks.

The door shuts and locks itself?

Paul pauses as George continues boasting and smiles

George boasts and smiles? I know that's not what you mean, but without the correct punctuation, it's unclear.

then he continues on to the infirmary to speak to Madeline.

Wasn't Operations wounded worse than Madeline? Why is she still confined to the infirmary?

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[> [> [> Re: Comments (r) / Just wonderful. Working on it. Thanks again. -- Deedra, 13:50:04 06/20/02 Thu

Hello,

It's coming right alone.:-]

God bless,
Deedra

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