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Date Posted: 11:51:34 06/20/02 Thu
Author: Deedra
Subject: Re: Part 3. more comments....Thanks!
In reply to: ~delle 's message, "The Copy-Cat Conspiracy. Part 3. more comments" on 18:55:27 06/19/02 Wed

Hey everyone,

I truly appreciate everyone's time and effort. I am working on the changes you've suggested.

Also, understand that this is just a rough draft and in no way a final draft. With your help I will be making many changes.

Hence, ~delle wrote; Also, Are you familiar with the writing Mantra "Show, not tell"? It's much more difficult than one would think. Certainly it's something I struggle with constantly.

Yes, The expressions need to be added and will come in time.
I wanted to get the grammar, punctuation, and plot straighten out first. I know.. It's a mess! :-]
As you stated mantra is a struggle. I wanted to divide then concur that aspect. Mantra is next.

Thanks and God bless you all.
Deedra

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