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Date Posted: 13:48:44 06/13/01 Wed
Author: ~~Lauren
Subject: totally unthought out and written too quickly...whatever...& i hate the ending...

"The world can skip me over again,"
she said to no one in particular -
and the last of all her hope drained out
with the beginning hours of summer.

December's coming back today.

And her pant hems scratch the pavement
as she spits out her memories -
today got jealous of them
and wants control back, so she gave it.

Her name begins with a letter that's foreign
and her tongue speaks inaudibly.
"The world seems to miss me,"
she cries out, letting it sink out.

Winter is going to block her in.

"The world shares me till I'm worn,"
she screams at the building tops and
hovers over the cracks in the walk.
She feels as though her binding broke.

The season's taking it's toll.

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i didnt want to reply to stuff cos the school computer's slow... but i like it so much i just hadda! -- saira khan, 14:28:05 06/13/01 Wed
not going to pick out anything in particular... thought it was good though, i liked a few of the concepts and the imagery was great. (NT) -- Hobbes, 02:24:24 06/14/01 Thu

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