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Date Posted: 19:52:19 06/19/01 Tue
Author: sima
Subject: "Exalted" for pat...this is the first nice poem i've ever written, i'm new at this, so yeah..

Some nites these stars fall down
and i'm left to lay you upon
them- holding on to the kisses
i've waited my whole life for.
And I bury all the wishes I've made.
The air is thick in heaven,
just one gasp of you
could last me a life time,
like the gift that keeps on giving,
and if that's all it takes,
than this last breath will do me
an eternity of pleasure.
I'm spending forever upon the dreams
you've made for me.

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argh, i hate when i post an unedited version of my poetry. so yeah. (NT) -- sim, 19:56:52 06/19/01 Tue
sims, this was beautious. (i know that's not a word, but whatever. i like it better.) you should write "nice", or "positive" poems more often. no matter what you write, it's always freakin' awesome. you know that. my fav lines are "And I bury all the wishes I've made." and the last two. like you. (NT) -- Jessica!, 23:21:40 06/19/01 Tue
this is so sweet jen. awww. and i like the last line as well. but yea... very cool. i miss you. (NT) -- saira, 19:50:22 06/21/01 Thu

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