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Date Posted: 01:13:25 05/18/01 Fri
Author: Crysta
Subject: This is really good. I love how you use the word "blinking".
In reply to: ~~Lauren 's message, "...ReQuiver..." on 00:57:32 05/18/01 Fri

The only part I would say drew away from the whole poem is the use of too many "and's" and "but's" Other than that, I really like this poem.

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