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Date Posted: 20:27:41 03/20/06 Mon
Author: ShanBan
Subject: Chapter Ten - Bad Dreams and Band-Aids
In reply to: ShanBan 's message, "Chapter Nine - He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not....." on 19:49:59 03/20/06 Mon

This chapter is kinda depressing so just bear with me....

Keith had fallen right to sleep but for Shannon it was impossible so she got up and went into her room to see if that would help. She layed down and soon enough she fell asleep.
*It was dark when she got home, she had to work late at the barn in preperation for the weekends events. She saw her roomate's and best friend Gwen's car out front. She opened the door and all the lights were off. It was late but it wasnt that late, but she figured that maybe Gwenie was tired and went to bed early. When she put her stuff down and walked into the kitchen something felt very off. She couldnt explain it but it made her shiver with fear. She called for Gwen but got no answer. She walked toward teh stairs and her music playing, although it wasnt anykind of music that she or Gwen would listen to. Then it hit her, Jay, Gwen's boyfriend loved that kind of music. "He must be here..." she sighed, she hated Jay, he creeped her out. She still had the feeling that something wasnt right so she knocked on Gwen's door, no answer. She triend the knob and it opened, she peered in, it was dark but she could see broken mirror all over the floor and things thrown about the room. She swung the door open but no one was in there. She carefully walked in and looked around, there was a small light coming from the bathroom. She was terrified to open the door, she was shaking and started crying. "Gwen???" she chocked out. Slowly she opened the door and it felt like someone had hit her in the chest with a hammer. The walls were covered in blood and Gwen and Jay were both dead on the floor....*
Shannon shot up in bed hysterically crying and screaming at the top of her lungs and her hands were covered in blood. Keith burst throught the door and grabbed her. "Shan! Shan! Wake up! Wake up its me!!! Its Keith" Kenny rushed in and joined them on the bed. She stopped screaming and opened her eyes, waking up she gasped for air. She continued crying and Keith pulled her in to hold her, she was shaking uncontrolably. "Shhhh sweetie what happened??" Kenny looked down at the blood running down her arms "Keith man! Look..." Keith looked down at what Kenny saw, "Shan look at me", he grasped her face in his hands, "What happened?" "I was there Keith! Agian! It all happened again, I could here the music. I saw them!!" she cried. "Gwenie?" She couldnt answer she just nodded her head. Kenny grabbed her arms and opened her hands, "I think we need to get you to a hospital..."
They piled in Keith's car and Kenny drove while Keith held Shannon in the back. It was a short wait in the ER and soon Shannon was greeted by the doctor. "Well I dont think you need stitches but I want to wrap them up good." "Ok..." she blankly said. "So this happend while you were sleeping, must have been some hell of a nightmare..." "Who said it was a nightmare?" "Usually when someone makes a fist so hard that they dig their nails a quarter inch into their palms they aren't dreaming about butterflies and rainbows....." She didnt answer him.
After she was all wrapped up and the paper work was signed she left to go home. Keith carried her upstairs and held her till she fell asleep....

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[> [> [> [> [> chapter ten -- kumonkey, 23:07:52 03/20/06 Mon [1]

Shan, you have me hooked !!And not just with all the sexy Keith-pressed-up-against-her-hips-grinding stuff [although,who here doesn't love that?].The emotions of the people in the story come thruogh nicely, as well as the "other things" that are happening in their lives.
A good read , as they say !!


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