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Subject: A poem,

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Dartpaw
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Date Posted: 16:18:04 11/17/02 Sun

In this fort there are good beasts,
Lots of stories and many feasts,
But all these creatures are great as friends,
Let's hope this never ends.

A squirrel I am from head to toe,
Tail swishy to and fro,
A tunic made of green coloured wool,
I think Dibbuns are wonderful!.

I have red fur, and I may include,
And am hardly ever rude,
I like the others in this fort,
My friends and fair cohorts.

I like hares and hedgehogs too,
I like moles, and also shrews,
Voles and mice, and otters as well,
and my own species are also swell.

Well if you are new, and are kinda shy,
don't try to hide as others pass by,
Because a memory that rings a bell,
is that I was once too, new as well.

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Darn... I forgot to add badgers, It probably wouldn't fit anyways... oh well ^__^ (NT) Dartpaw 16:19:44 11/17/02 Sun

I'm sure they don't mind wot wot! (NT) Lancepaw Fortesque 17:40:50 11/17/02 Sun

Hmm. I like it lots. It flows along quite well. Just one thing I have to point out, or rather, to ask about. The part in your second stanza about wool and then Dibbuns doesn't really have a transition...or maybe I'm just not getting something. O.o I'll go with the latter. (NT) Retina 22:29:40 11/17/02 Sun

Just filling the gap. ^__^ Sometimes it's not that easy to make a perfect rhyme, so I add something that Fits and is true, but you're right they both are different, but they are still two true things... (I should have added, that that were supposed to describe me, and an emotion, but I could have put that in a different one, but thanks! -__^ (NT) Dartpaw 00:50:56 11/18/02 Mon

Ere der aint nuff about da dibbunses! (NT) Tangle 21:42:50 11/18/02 Mon