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Subject: Sinistria: Remain in the Shadows


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Date Posted: 21:23:25 12/09/03 Tue

This is some of my book Remain in the Shadows. It's part of a trilogy and I'd just like some feedback on it. If you want to hear more, please let me know.

For the first bit of the story, see next post titled Remain in the Shadows.

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Remain in the ShadowsSwordslash21:25:52 12/09/03 Tue
Wow!! You are a great writer!! Please post more of it!! (NT)Jade (now known as haikugirl)11:28:02 12/21/03 Sun
Do you always tell everyone that? I will post more soon, but it will not be as long! Christmas has me in it's claws. (NT)Swordslash22:03:23 12/22/03 Mon
I only tell it to the good writers. **is insulted** (NT)haikugirl23:00:08 12/22/03 Mon
Thank you! Another (shorter) part of the story inside!Swordslash23:15:57 12/22/03 Mon
Very suspenseful. (NT)haikugirl12:05:00 12/23/03 Tue
Um...would you like to hear more? Because you've already been very helpful and I don't care if you don't want to hear anymore! (NT)Swordslash23:57:30 12/23/03 Tue
Fine. (NT)haikugirl11:46:21 12/24/03 Wed
A comment for the author inside the postMelias17:04:22 12/25/03 Thu
That's kind of what I've been thinking. I've been comparing it to other stories on this board and it just isn't that good. I wish Lancepaw would delete this post so I could work on the beginning again! (NT)Swordslash the Thoughtful13:28:44 12/28/03 Sun
Thanks, Sekin! Tolkien inspiried me there. I'm going skiing until the fifth of January, so I won't be able to post, but I'll see what I can do when I get back. (NT)Swordslash15:06:14 12/31/03 Wed


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