OK Im sorry that this has to be so short, but I dont have much time. Here ya go -- The Fire Side

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Subject: OK Im sorry that this has to be so short, but I dont have much time. Here ya go

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Whiteye
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Date Posted: 00:05:50 08/13/03 Wed
In reply to: Whiteye 's message, "OOC: Boy do I ever know what you mean...Its a tough language, but I love it!" on 23:58:04 08/12/03 Tue

As Idela reached Jeniva�s house, she gasped in horror. The blazing fire that was once a house illuminated her sorrowful face. She ran inside the burning ruins to see if Jeniva was still there. She cried out as a fiery beam fell close in front of her, catching her light violet dress on fire. She screamed at the top of her lungs as she tried to beat out the flames. She finally succeeded in putting it out and she stumbled around a corner. She screamed again as a hand put it�s weight on her shoulder, but as she swiveled, the horror stricken look on her face died down to relief as she saw Jeniva in front of her. The short elf guided her through roaring flames to her door, where Idela kicked it open and down, wisely not touching the steel doorknob. As Miss Karr led Miss Iarwain outside, they stood and turned, watching the leaping flames before them. Jeniva spoke softly, �That house was built by my own hands, exactly 1000 years ago. Do you know who burned it?� Idela tightened her lips and no more was said. They all knew the answer. The Galen.

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wow....so suspensful! It's great!!! For a second there, I thought Jeniva was dead! I was like, "Nooo!!!! Not Jeniva!!!!!!!" Then, when I found out that she lived, I breathed a sigh of relief. :) OOC: It is a hard language to learn, but it's very rewarding. Do you have the Red Book? It helped me a lot. (NT) Tacroy Bladefire 01:36:18 08/13/03 Wed

**grins** You like it? Great! You're extremely talented with your stories as well! Yeah, I liked Jeniva (and was going to make her dead, but as you will find out later, she's the last surviving changer in the Land.) OOC: No I don't, but if you recommend it I'll see what I can find (NT) -- Whiteye, 19:29:59 08/13/03 Wed

OOC: yeah, it helps a lot with congegating the verbs and it gives you a list of nouns with their elvish translations. BIC: Thanks for the compliment, but I find that you're work is ten times better than mine :) That's good with Jeniva....I like her a lot! Keep writing!!! KEEP WRITING!!!!! (NT) -- Your humble admirer, Tacroy Bladefire, 01:58:22 08/14/03 Thu

OOC: Kewl I'll have to check it out! Oh, by the way, IRL I'm blushing at your compliments BIC: Oh come on! My writing isn't THAT good. Yeah Jeniva is really neat. WAIT! I just got an idea for my story...**mischevious grin** Well, no time to write right now, but I will keep it up! (NT) -- Whiteye, 14:11:31 08/14/03 Thu

Oh yes, your writing is wonderful! Look how many people think so!!! Yeah!!!!!! KEEP IT UP! KEEP IT UP! (NT) -- Your friend, Tacroy Bladefire, 19:03:40 08/14/03 Thu

**blushes** Awwww you're so nice, Tacroy! I'll write right now! Inside (Tacroy this part you will love) -- Whiteye, 20:01:25 08/14/03 Thu

BIC: Whiteye! You're so nice! I'm speechless.....Thank you! Thank you so much Whiteye! THANK YOU!!!!! You are such an excellent writer, it is an honor to have one of your characters named after me.....Thank you so much (NT) -- Your speechless, breathless, and extremely happy friend who waits eargerly for the next part, Tacroy Bladefire, 20:30:43 08/14/03 Thu

**grins** I'm the one who's nice? Well I'm glad you're pleased. I am honored that I have such a persistent reader! I really am flattered by all of your compliments, and so I will write more! I hope you like the future for Tacroy which you will find out later **mischevious grin** Inside (Oh BTW, is your name pronounced Tack-roy or Tase-roy or what?) -- Whiteye, 01:04:23 08/15/03 Fri

Heeeheee!! I burst out laughing when I read this. Whiteye, you have a wonderful gift because it takes quite a lot to make me laugh just as I did when I read this. heeheee....*Wipes away tears of mirth* This is excellent! MORE!!!!! OOC: It's Tack-roy, you got it right on first try! Really, Whiteye, I'm very honored that you named a character after me. Once again. Thank you and really, I was laughing very, very hard. (NT) -- Your fan, Tacroy Bladefire, 01:12:19 08/15/03 Fri

(WOW! We're on at the same time!) BIC: Really? You liked it? Thanks so much! It feels great to have a fan. I'll write right away! OOC: Really, it was no problem. It was the least I could do for you (NT) -- Whiteye, 01:15:21 08/15/03 Fri

OOC: BTW, do you have AIM? If so, I could talk to you there (NT) -- Whiteye, 01:19:45 08/15/03 Fri

OOC: Well I have to go now, but I promise I will get more up soon! Tomorrow I should be able to. (NT) -- Whiteye, 01:25:41 08/15/03 Fri

YEAH! TOMMAROW!!!! MORE TOMMAROW!!!! Keep it up Whiteye, your story is awsome! (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 04:39:53 08/15/03 Fri

Inside for next! (You are so sweet, Tacroy) -- Whiteye, 15:11:59 08/15/03 Fri

Oh NOOOOO!!!! Not the Galen!!!!!!!! Oh the suspense Whiteye!!!!! I froze too when they heard the hoofbeats!! Keep going please!!! I beg of you, oh fabulous writer, indulge your humble fan with more! (NT) -- The suspense is killing me, master storyteller, please write more, your friend who wishes he could write as well as you, Tacroy Bladefire, 17:45:49 08/15/03 Fri

**laughs** Awwwwww you're so so sweet, Tacroy! You can definatelly write as well as I can, if not better, so dont worry about it. Lol I promise to get more up soon, but I g2g. Thanks for the comments! (NT) -- The extremely pleased and blushing Whiteye, 21:08:39 08/15/03 Fri

Now you're the one who's making me blush! You can write far better than I ever can/will and both you and I know it. It is an excellent story and I eargerly wait for more!!!! (NT) -- Blushing, Tacroy Bladefire, 23:46:02 08/15/03 Fri

Oh, Tacroy! **grins shyly** Do you have AIM? That way I could talk to you about some idea's I had...If you do, my AIM s/n is WhiteyeDobieLuvr (NT) -- Whiteye, 15:39:52 08/16/03 Sat

*shakes is head sadly* No, I don't have AIM....Unfortunately not.... (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 17:44:34 08/16/03 Sat

**juts out her lower lip** Awwww...Well you can download it free from AIM.com...oh well. Anyways, I need to get more story up, dont I! (NT) -- Whiteye, 23:47:20 08/17/03 Sun

I'll try to download it, but my computer's acting up so I don't know if I'll be succesful. And yes! You do need to write more! MORE!!!!! Heehee! I've been waiting on the edge of my seat for the next part!!!! Please, MORE!!!!! (NT) -- Your fan, Tacroy Bladefire, 01:02:23 08/18/03 Mon

**laughs** I'll see what I can do, oh good and faithful fan. Maybe later today (NT) -- Whiteye, 19:49:52 08/18/03 Mon

ok! Next inside (didnt I promise I would get some up today?) -- Whiteye, 23:26:16 08/18/03 Mon

How could that bore me, Queen of Writers? That was excellent! But now, once again, I'm left waiting on the edge of my seat in anxiety! And once again, I beg you, Write MORE!!!! (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 23:37:59 08/18/03 Mon

**laughs** Well I hope I'm not using too cheesy action. I will write soon! Hey, anyone know how to move the messages over? (NT) -- Whiteye, 01:42:29 08/19/03 Tue

Cheesy? No way!!!!! My writing uses cheesy action! Yours is above and beyond cheesy. It's more along the lines of...fabulous, wonderful, exciting, suspensful. And yes, anyone who could move this over,it would be greatly appreciated, because I haven't a clue how to do it! (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 02:16:03 08/19/03 Tue

Well I'm glad you enjoy it! Let me try something. I hope this works (NT) -- Whiteye, 13:21:49 08/19/03 Tue

Did it work? .......I don't think so. Grrr, I really don't like it when this board does this. (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 19:15:47 08/19/03 Tue

Grrrrrrr me too! I know it's not much (at ALL) , but here's the next part -- Whiteye, 20:11:37 08/19/03 Tue

Yeah!!! Go Ferriff!!!! YEAH!!!!!!! (NT) -- Tacroy Bladefire, 20:40:56 08/19/03 Tue

OH MY GOSH!!!! THAT ROX SO BAD!!!! I've been busy wid my site and other stuff, so I haven't been able to read stuff here, but I had some time FINALLY so I came here and saw you were writing something so.. But man, thix rox! It kicks butt! Your so talented Whiteye! I was reading the story as fast as I could cause I wanted to know what happened SO bad! Keep on writing! (NT) -- Shade, 05:06:28 08/27/03 Wed