| Subject: I haven't told a story for a while but now I started one, hope you like it. |
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Date Posted: 22:18:25 09/28/03 Sun
This story starts off in our world and eventually gets to the Redwall world, except this isn’t one of my, ‘Human travels to Redwall’ thing that I usually do, but something different
It starts out a little junky but it gets better…
Tyler was a regular boy, he was about 15 and he liked to ride his bike, and watch TV and he had a crush on a certain Girl… Cindy Cloud.
He had a mother and a father and a brother, and they lived in a big house in the city.
He wasn’t a bad kid, but not a very good one either; he got in trouble at school a lot usually from fighting.
One day his parents had a family discussion about him,
‘Tyler your Grades are slipping…’
‘And you get into so many fights do you realize how many times we had to talk with your principal?’
Tyler sighed knowing they were going to ground him or something.
‘And further more blah blah blah…’ he started droning their voices out, and ignored them completely’
‘Tyler are you listening? Blah blah blah.
Tyler tried not to listen but he couldn’t help hearing what they were trying to say.
‘This is for our future Tyler, and you need to learn discipline we won’t be around forever you know.’
‘Good!’ he snorted.
He parents were furious, ‘You just go to your room and not come out till tomorrow!! We will talk with you then, if you care then!’
Tyler went to his room, ‘stupid Parents… why should they run my life, I can’t do anything without them going down my throat! I hate them I wish I never had Parents.’
And he went to sleep.
The next morning he awoke but his eyes were still closed, he awaited the radio to come on like it does so many times but it didn’t.
He had such a wonderful dream, he didn’t want to get up he just wanted to sit in his bed forever.
He then opened an eye and stared at a red stone ceiling, Red?! His ceiling was white.
He got up in bed and realized he wasn’t in his bedroom he was in room with a single cot bed and the walls were red stone as well and he had a small window which faced out towards a forest.
‘What the heck is going on here!?’
He stood up and headed for the door and as he walked towards it the door had opened and a mouse poked his head in.
‘You slept in Quince, that’s not good you know’
‘AHHH!!! What are you!?’ he screamed
The mouse looked shocked, ‘Are you playing a game with me Quince? The abbot already knows about how you are so lazy all the time, maybe you should help brother Simon with the ale.’ The mouse left.
Tyler was shocked, he had no idea what was going on, he then looked at himself in the mirror
‘AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!’
He was a squirrel! A fat one at that, how could this have happened!?
He was wearing a Green tunic and had a tall bushy tail, he didn’t understand what was going on, last night he was human in his own house now he was a squirrel in some strange red place?’
‘I haven’t woken up, I am still dreaming that’s it… I will wake up in a second.’
He scratched himself in the arm with one of his claws and they were sharp, it hurt but he still didn’t wake up.
He then looked out the window and noticed that there was an orchard below with many happy creatures playing around, he noticed some hedgehogs and otters and mice, even a badger.
‘What the heck is this place!!??’
He opened the door and headed down the stairs and bumped into an elderly shrew, ‘Sorry… my fault!’
‘I should say it is young un’ the shrew snorted
‘Um what are you and where am I!?’
The shrew laughed, ‘Quince I always knew you liked to joke but try new material I mean… every one knows about Redwall Abbey why of course you lived here since you came as a homeless orphan many seasons ago.
Tyler didn’t know why everyone was calling him Quince, for some reason nothing made sense anymore.
He continued down the stairs into great hall… and awed at the beautiful tapestry of Martin the Warrior.
He thought this place was very strange yet fascinating… somehow he had gone to some other dimension run by animals, and by the look of it they were in Medival times.
He headed out into the grounds and bumped into another mouse.
The mouse looked elderly and very wise, it looked like he was the kind of creature that everyone would be asking advice from.
‘Do you know where I can find the leader of this place?’
‘Are you daft Quince?’ and the mouse walked away.
He was alone, he wished he knew what this Quince person was like so he wouldn’t feel so alienated or at least know someone who could tell him something helpful.
He stumbled around the grounds and noticed a mouse whose habit was not green but brown, he knew he must be a more higher authority.
‘Um I have a problem…’
‘Ask away Quince’
‘I don’t know why but I can’t remember anything about this place as if I have never been here… don’t think I’m weird but I’m not Quince I am someone else’
The mouse sighed… ‘I know how you feel sometime many creatures in the abbey feel different but it’s just growing up…’
‘It’s not that, I am Tyler Grant, from another world I have someone entered the body of this Quince and everyone thinks I’m him.’
The mouse sighed again, ‘Insanity is not a good thing… it’s not very good at all, we had several insane creatures but we couldn’t help them, I think you have to find help on your own.’
Tyler was getting scared, now they think he’s insane!? There has to be someone who will understand him.
To be continued, please tell me what you think.
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