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Chapter one inside!!

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Dusty Dirtypaws

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Date Posted: 18:13:51 10/06/03 Mon
In reply to: Dusty Dirtypaws 's message, "Tory!!!" on 18:08:49 10/06/03 Mon

Esram had long awaited this day, for this was the day that he would take his Knighthood test. Esram had wanted to be a knight for nearly all his life, he first got the notion when his brother disappeared. He was about 8 years old when his brother up and vanished, Esram and Derek (Twin brothers) were playing a game of Hide-and-seek in Savior woods behind their house. It was Esrams turn to be it, so he started counting, right when he got to 20 he heard his twin shout, �Esram, Esram!! Come, come quickly!!� Esram started walking toward the sound of his brothers voice, �I�m coming! I�m coming! Stop your shouting!!� �Come quicker! I found something incr�..� Dereks voice ended abruptly. �Derek!? Derek is this some kind of joke! Derek? Derek where are you!� Esram searched for his brother loyally for about 10 minutes, Esram began to think this was no joke. �Could Derek have been kidnapped?� Esram thought as many other crazy ideas floated through his mind. Later Esram returned home alone. His parents were terrified, they went and begged to the king himself to help find their lost son, but to no avail. They spent a good deal of money on trackers, searchers and all manner of people, but still no signs of improvement. Every day for 12 years Esram searched those woods for his lost brother. He never found him, but it had been 12 years and Esram finally accepted the fact that his twin was dead and that he had to get on with life. So Esram applied for the Knighthood and 3 years of gruesome training later he was ready to take the test of Knighthood.

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It's alright. Godd storyline, pretty darn original, however it could be written better. (NT)	Torleep	22:40:02 10/09/03 Thu