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Subject: Ok I've come up with scene one and part of scene two. Look in (by the way, I've come up with some parts that I thought were good. Dakkan, Hiddenpaw. You like it? Dartpaw, I'd like you to be the elderly mouse. We can get you some costumes. Gleameye? Queen?) Author: Whiteye [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 02:32:40 05/03/03 Sat In reply to: Whiteye 's message, "Ok to both of you. ** Punches more in braile** Honeypaw and Silvawhip. Look in for parts list (edited from last one)" on 01:01:04 05/03/03 Sat *Nartana enters, being drugs by her paws behind a cart. Vermin Gaurds are standing over her.* Nartana: Vermin! I never should have gone wading alone. *growls* Stingtooth: You stinkin' beast! *Lashes his whip across her back. She doesn't flinch, and stares at him with hate filled eyes. He shudders and falls to the back of the vermin line.* Cidior: What's going on here? Where are you taking that poor maid? Dryclaw: *sneering* Where we're takin' 'er is none o' yer bisness now is it, old feller? *Throws him down. *Instantly, Hiddenpaw appears beside Cidiors side.* Hiddenpaw: Cidior? Cidior? *growls at Dryclaw* I'll make you pay! Dryclaw: *chickens out and runs* Help me! Help me! The mad beast is after me! *Striketail steps quivering in front of Hiddenpaw.* Striketail: Now wot rite do yoo 'ave pushin' one o' my crew, eh? Hiddenpaw: He killed the beast I knew as father! *Striketail looks over Hiddenpaws shoulder.* Striketail: Wot father? *Hiddenpaw turns to look. Striketail stabs him in the back and runs for the cart. As they move on, they don't notice that Nartana is gone.* Hiddenpaw: *moaning* Ah! Cidior? Where are you? *There is only empty ground where Cidior was. In his last moments of conciousness he sees a concerned looking squirrel and a mole peering over his face.* ************************************************* Scene II *While Hiddenpaw is unconcious* Fern: He's injured badly, Syana. Syana: Hurr! Oi be's suggergestin' that wem best let hims wake oop beefore wems treet 'im! Fern: Why's that, Syana? Syana: *looking at her as if the answer was obvious* Becorse heem carnt tellin' usns 'ow heem feels! Fern: Ah. Well then, let's tend to the old mouse. What was it he called him? Syana: *grinning until her face crinkles* Cidiodory! Fern: Ah yes. Cidior! Hiddenpaw: *moaning* Cidior? Where's Cidior? Fern: *glancing at Syana* Syana, tend to Cidior. I'll be there in a moment. *to Hiddenpaw* Cidior is fine. Just a little dazed. Roll over and let me have a look at that back. *He rolls over and Fern sees some crusted blood.* Fern: Ooo. That looks awful! Let me tend to it. *She takes a small knife and scrapes away the blood* Hiddenpaw: Ow! Fern: Sorry...*She looks at the wound and packs some moss into it. Then she binds it carefully.* Hiddenpaw: Owww! Fern: Sorry! Syana: BuHurr! Oi's tended to ee Cidiodory! Heem'll be foin. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]