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Subject: Following Whiteye's example, I am posting a non-Redwall story @ her urging look inside for first chapter


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Shyla
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Date Posted: 22:03:04 07/29/03 Tue

You Wouldn’t Believe Me if I Told You

Chapter 1

Jeana Cason was a nice girl with long dark blonde hair, a lovely complexion and a great disposition. She wore glasses over her lovely hazel eyes and had beautiful straight teeth as she had just had her braces removed. She had recently celebrated her fourteenth birthday on November third. She lived out in the country in a nice, big house adjacent to a small barn,
with her family which included her dad Stan, her mom Karen, her 10 year-old sister JoAnna, and her 3 year-old brother Joel. The family pets included the following: a female golden retriever named Shadow, two chickens (Henny Penny and Mrs. Cluck), a rooster named Dawn, and their four horses, Ginger, Midnight, Trigger, and Princess.

It started snowing in December shortly after Hanukah began, so it was a wonderful white Christmas for the Cason family. It usually snowed well into February in and around Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, and this year was no exception. On the fourth of January the snow started getting worse. There were frequent snowstorms, and on the fifteenth of January the school closed because most of the roads were iced over. Jeana was glad for the break from school, even though she knew she would have to work hard at home. In addition to her regular chores she also had to take care of the animals and keep them warm.

it will get better, this is just the description, next comes the plot! :)

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Great! Keep it up! (NT)Whiteye20:10:44 07/30/03 Wed


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