Please read my story! Here is chap.2 I'm changing Mathalee's name to Riverkell -- The Fire Side

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Subject: Please read my story! Here is chap.2 I'm changing Mathalee's name to Riverkell

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Juar

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Date Posted: 01:49:10 05/15/03 Thu
In reply to: Juar 's message, "completion of chap. 1 *inside* p.s. Forgive me if I write some names wrong, I'm new at this." on 00:55:08 05/10/03 Sat

"Leppy!... Lepeleeee! Where is she?" Kit strolled along the wooded path. She knew that she shouldn't be out in thewoods after the badger Lord forbidded it but she had to talk to her friend. Suddenly the Auburn Squirrel jumped out of the trees in front of her. Kit put a paw to her lips. "Quiet! I only came out here to say goodbye Lep. Lord Wirtamir has forbidden anybeast to go outside of Brockhall. I heard you are going back to the south." Kit paused and studied her friend. A sturdy but small built squirrel Lepelee was always the fearless one. She had a tough look in her eye. She wore a tattered yellow tunic with an empty dagger pouch, sling and sling stones, and small carrying pouch all attached to her belt. "If no one is allowed out what are you doing here?" Leppy asked with a funny smile. "Oh you know that I snuck out. Don't tell. So are you leaving?"
"We are going to try but... My parents said something about the weasels being to close. I'm getting worried. My father brought out Ole Faithful today and polished it!" Kit rolled her eyes. She knew all about Ole Faithful, the beautiful sword that Crossbow took such good care of. "I wondor if it's really that serious? Well I gotta get going, my mother will want me to help with tea soon." Kit paused and the two friends embraced. They exchanged small gifts and went on talking for a minute or two and then parted.
Kit jogged back up the path. She looked around at the beautiful woodlands. Rhodedendrum bushes had blossomed and the chestnut tree's were bearing their fruit extra early. 'wow' She thought, 'It sure is beautiful. it would be awful for some scurvy vermin to start parading through here all of a sudden.' As Kit became lost in thought she didn't notice when she started thinking aloud. She was pretty close to Brockhall when another thought hit her mind. "I wondor if Crossbow is going to have to use his sword. Everybody is making this out to be a big war and WHAAAAIIIIIIIII!!!! "The world flew by in a rush of motion as Kit was flung upside down and started to shoot up into the trees. She screamed in a high pitched voice until she stopped, close to the tree tops. A rope cut at her footpaw that was trapped. Kit whimpered as the blood started to rush to her head. 'what happened? This can't get worse' She thought. But it did. She looked down to see the worst thing of all. An upside down army of weasels! 'Okay so the army isn't upside down but I am.' Kit confirmed. They had all come running out of no wher it seemed. 'Probably when I screamed, ' she reasoned. But, they didn't seem to notice where she was, at least not yet. Kit gulped and reached for her pockets. ---------'There has to be something... Aha!' Kit pulled out a handful of junk. 'A string, a paper clip, a claw file, there has to be something.' Kit studied the string it was thick for a string, strong too. Kit pulled out a spoon from her pocket. A plan started to form in her mind. She tied the end of the string to the spoon then threw it for all she was worth. It hooked onto a nearby branch. Kit secured the string then tied the other end to her belt. She glanced at the ground. 'It sure is a long way. Maybe if I surrender..' Kit shook her head and continued with her work. Then she started with the file. As she neared the last threads of the rope around her leg she took one deep breath. 'Here it goes' She chopped off the last thread.

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Subject	Author	Date
READ MY STORY PLEASE!!!!! chapter three	Juar	00:33:27 05/27/03 Tue
Loud applause (NT) -- Tangle, 23:31:50 05/29/03 Thu