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Subject: Shadows: A Freestyle Poem


Author:
Retina
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Date Posted: 15:14:16 12/01/02 Sun


Hiding in the shadows, waiting.
Promises are only debts unpaid.
Not giving another second glance,
As they pass and continue on.

Lurking in the deep crowds
Are the hunters, preying on the hunted.
Waiting to strike on the targets
Who are easiest, most vulnerable.

Sticks and stones may break bones,
And words will hurt from within.
To stay silent and unnoticable,
Is the only way to avoid hurt.

Invisibility is a curse, and a blessing.
Avoided, yet presense is known.
But perhaps that is the best,
For the hunters don't prey in the shadows.


A/N: Personally, I think this one is rather dark and peculiar. I'm not sure if y'all will get this one.

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I like it!! I like all your poems Ret, Youy really have a talent!! (NT)Southpaw16:44:38 12/01/02 Sun
Ditto Southpaw ^_^ (NT)Lancepaw Fortesque19:39:46 12/01/02 Sun
Aw, I'm honored. It's nice to know people like my work. ^^;; (NT)Retina21:52:40 12/01/02 Sun
Well it's good aint it! (NT)Tangle22:06:08 12/03/02 Tue


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