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Subject: winter


Author:
Pyxis Rosethorne
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Date Posted: 00:27:20 12/10/02 Tue


i watch

as i walk this lonely path
i see the fallen leaves
ornamenting the trails
like troops of soldiers
fallen from nature's battle
tumbling into a dusty oblivian
and left to die

blue skies glitter through the trees
creating an illusion
of a thousand sapphires
strung in the clouds
an infinte necklace
of indefinite beauty

snow coats the trees
giving them white features
and i watch...
and wonder
why they resemble an unfinished drawing
an incomplete painting
full of wonder and beauty
is the purposeful work of mother nature?
is she the one with the skillful hand?
does she sacrafice her own soldiers...
year after year...
just for beauty?



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Jolly good wot wot! (NT)Lancepaw Fortesque16:38:34 12/10/02 Tue
Exqiusit poem; sad, dark, and forboding; Just the way I like them. (NT)Wraith21:09:52 12/10/02 Tue
OOH!! Ilike dat word 'sqeezit! and I yikes da poem toos! (NT)Lyra(OOc does ya read circle of magic??)23:08:44 12/10/02 Tue
  • Thanks a lot! ^_^ (NT) -- Pyxis Rosethorne Ooc(no, I don't, but I've hards about how good that series is!), 23:36:34 12/10/02 Tue
OOc, yeah they ROCK!!!! T. pierce RULES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (NT)Lyra22:05:23 12/11/02 Wed
Me likes dat! (NT)Tangle22:12:14 12/11/02 Wed
Very nice! I like the flow of it and everything when I read it. Well done! (NT)Kaoin Scarface20:36:22 12/12/02 Thu
The Shannara series is better than circle of magic! (NT)Wraith21:41:59 12/12/02 Thu
Spiffin!!! (NT)Southpaw07:42:10 12/14/02 Sat
**Sticks out tongue and blows raspberry.** ppprrrtttt!!! Is not. (although I rathered liked Sword of Shannara) (NT)Lyra21:51:33 12/18/02 Wed
Amazingly beautiful, but dark at the same. **grins** SpLeNDid! (NT)Longlegs02:37:28 12/19/02 Thu


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