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Date Posted: 13:23:00 06/20/02 Thu
Author: Deedra
Subject: Re: Comments (r) > I've made the corrections. You're great! Thanks.
In reply to: Nestra 's message, "Comments (r)" on 08:16:11 06/20/02 Thu

Hello,

You're great!

And you are so right about this.(LOL) I've got the rough areas marked. :-] It will come. And you keep it coming too!

~delle wrote; What I'm missing here, and in the rest of the story, are connections. You obviously have this all plotted out, and it makes perfect sense to you. But you have to make those connections for the reader. Very few people are going to persevere through a story when they don't understand what's going on.

Thanks.

God bless,
Deedra

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