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Date Posted: 03:04:17 06/12/01 Tue
Author: Hobbes
Subject: "trying to somehow infuse my image in your mind without stimulating your eyes"..love that "Silly me, the fool." .. and the last line. Nice work
In reply to: jess-lane 's message, "i thought i was taking a new approach, but then i split my long lines into seperate stanzas- oh well... i think its different for my style - "slant rhyme"" on 02:27:44 06/12/01 Tue


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  • love all the above parts and also "rubbing my features away till I'm gone- i won't find/strength for another try"....inspirational (NT) -- ~~Lauren, 00:27:53 06/13/01 Wed
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