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Subject: If you want constructive criticism.... I think the poem was very good, because it made sense, and wasnt just a jumble of words stuck together. *blushes* The only bad thing was that the syllables werent really lined up. Here's an exaggerated example, sorta: The cat was black, She scared me when I was wearing a back pack. Y'know what I mean? That was the only thing, tho...


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Date Posted: 18:06:57 03/31/02 Sun
In reply to: Quin 's message, "Oo...The Fireside. I'm not that good at stories...so I'll try a poem." on 14:01:52 03/31/02 Sun


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Thanks! An' Yep, I know whatja mean. *re-reads his poem* Yep, that is a problem...Yep. *pauses* I think the word 'yep' has become part of my daily vocabulary...Ye-*smacks himself on the forehead* (NT)Quin23:58:35 03/31/02 Sun


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